
A story of 2 girls lives in a pit of despair.
Written By:
Madison Sharman and Stephanie Sheirman
Prologue
There is a small, grungy, old town known as Blute. Towards the outskirts of the small town was
The teachers at JJ Thompson were well…pretty
The lives of J.J. Thompson are just more pages to our long and involved lives together.
The Boring Beginning.
After the long weekend, which seemed short to
Now I know this story seems a bit dull right now, which is understandable for it was a boring day in reality. So don’t stop reading on account of the lameness of this first section.
From down the hall,
They have been described as “so popular”, “beautiful” and “really lucky”.
Morgan and Katelyn were their names.
Will referred to the group as the four witches (this is a PG rated story so I left out a very important b in one of the words and replaced it with a w, so use your imagination).
Evil is Always Popular
The only reason why they were considered popular is because they have older boyfriends. And in truth Katelyn did not have an older boyfriend so she was excluded from their group sometimes. Morgan’s boyfriend Brendan, Will considered the ugliest man to ever walk the planet and yet he was called one of the hottest guys in the school by almost all the girls. Nervanna’s Boyfriend Billy moved in with her and her family. Finally, Tiffany boyfriend’s name is Dylan, who she recently cheated on with another guy. But somehow that made her cooler and everyone loves her more. As the group of 4 walked past Will’s locker, they turned to her and gave her a fake smile. Will returned the gesture and rolled her eyes. What made them so special? She thought.
Now settled at their seat the two friends were ready to eat their simple, extremely boring lunches. After about 2 minutes they were greeted by the rest of their posse, which included the flake
Will had brought her purse to the table and did not realize that it would get a content search by the rest of the table. Todd took out a comb from the bag and started to brush his hair. Will tried to tell him that it was in fact a dog comb which she used for her 4-H Club (which is a club where you work with your pets). Once he had figured what it was he slowly took it off his head then asked if
The Mystery of the Shrinking…
After school Will and a bunch of other kids from her school went swimming and bowling at the
The 2 awkward people sat as far a way from each other as possible. Ben tried to make small talk with his seat partner the whole way but her only response was “oh yah” (this phrase should be classified as the international phrase of not listening). Every time that Will looked at his face all she could think of was a greasy frying pan. His face was covered in red and white blotches, some of which were oozing a clear liquid. His body had a resemblance to an Ethiopian boy dieing of starvation. His legs were bowed and he worn tight “bum hugger” jeans. Finally when the bus was about 5 minutes from its destination, Ben turned to Will and said
“I hope that thing doesn’t happen to me when I get into the pool”
Will looked away, feeling that she was in the most uncomfortable moment in her life.
“It doesn’t usually happen, but it can”
Her heart raced as fast as a bullet, as she hoped that the damn bus would get to its destination.
“Do you know what I mean, well if you don’t understand I guess you won’t ever”
OH GOD KILL ME NOW. She screamed in her head hoping he would actually hear. But the jerk didn’t grant her request. If fact he didn’t even help the situation. Will vowed that she wouldn’t be at church that Sunday. You and I both know the truth of the matter is that she would be at church that Sunday for she was afraid to die and burn in the pits of hell. She is a goodie two shoes. Sorry, back to the #1 story of the year says the NEW YORK TIMES. Just kidding, this story wouldn’t even be published in the local paper. Will’s face had turned a bright red for the embarrassing moment. She turned to look out the window trying to think happy thoughts.
Then finally they made it to the bowling alley. Will later wondered if Ben was talking about “shrinkage”. I do not want to give you night mares so I will leave it at that. The group on the bus went bowling for a couple of hours and then went swimming, which they all found really fun.
Anna had “ditched” (excuse the term) her best friend to go on another trip, which was skiing. She then later blamed Will that she was the one who was ditching. I do not want to get in to it any further for there will be a major cat fight amongst the 2 ladies. Anna also had a great day even though she was far far away from her friends.
Anna’s Day
At
As it was getting closer to departure time Larissa showed up and joined the other two. Mr. Shaw did a quick attendance then everyone loaded onto the bus. Anna was getting restless for Veronica hadn’t showed up yet. It was
Once everyone got into Stronghold (this really cool wall climbing place) and changed and was back at the main meeting space they gave a quick demo on how to bale and climb safely. Everyone had to show the instructors twice to show they knew what they were doing then got to do whatever wall they wanted. Anna and Veronica choose a hard one first…it seemed easy on the ground,(they though were naive in the whole situation). While they were setting up for Anna’s climb Larissa was climbing on a relatively easy wall and started complaining how Melody was going to let her fall, she couldn’t do it anymore, and she was scared. Anna felt really bad for Melody cause she was a better baler than Larissa was, she paid attention the whole time. Therefore, after the 4 friends managed to climb a few more walls each they had to pack it up and head for the bus again.
It was a blur in the beginning once at C.O.P for Anna and Veronica…they’re minds were distracted by their growling stomachs. They were just getting their skies when Larissa and Melody came and asked if the two had seen Mr. Shaw or Mr. Potter. Veronica and Anna looked at each other than at their two friends and said in unison “No we haven’t why?”
Larissa replied in a whiny voice “because there are no lessons and I don’t know how to snowboard!” Veronica and Anna shrugged their shoulders and carried on with what they were doing as the other two left to look for the two teachers. As soon as Anna and Veronica got their skis and helmets they rushed to the cafeteria. Opened their lunch and dug their teeth into their sandwiches and other items of their lunches. Soon their stomachs were full and it was time to hit the slopes. They soon found their two friends practicing as best they could on the bunny hill. Then they all met at the bottom of that and Larissa decided she wanted to go on the big hill. (Now remember this is her first time snowboarding and she has no idea what she’s doing.) Therefore, they all agreed got in line for the chairlift and were loading when all of a sudden Melody fell and missed the chair lift she decided to stay down there.
The entire conversation for the whole way up the hill consisted of how the three friends felt bad for what had happened and of coarse Larissa complaining how without Melody she wouldn’t be able to go down and she had no idea what she was doing. The three of them reached the top managed to get off the lift and then well I hate to put you poor people in the misery that Veronica and mostly Anna had to endure. Larissa not knowing what she was doing kept falling every two minutes while complaining how she didn’t know what she was doing. Finally Ann had had enough and skied on ahead for a little bit then stopped hoping the other 2 were close behind, ha-ha what a joke! By now Anna was fed up, she wanted to go so bad but didn’t want to leave Veronica with the stupid little brat (also know as Larissa). She started walking up the hill again to see what was taking so long. Mr. Potter and Mr. Shaw were there too then Veronica skied down to Ann and said that Larissa was just going to slide down on her butt. Relieved Anna went flying down the hill; it was so great to be able to go finally! Then just as Mr. Potter was passing she lost control and fell, lucky she didn’t hurt anything.
So 2 hours later they were all at the bottom of the hill Larissa was getting skies and Anna was venting her frustration to her friends as was Melody only she did it in a more appropriate fashion than Ann. Veronica was stuck in the middle sticking up for Larissa anyways it took Larissa forever to get come back with skies.
For the rest of the time the four friends or should I say 3 friends and some extra baggage went on the other lift, 2 in a chair which worked much better than all 4 of them on one. Melody and Ann stuck together for most of the time Melody fell in a puddle twice while getting off the lift. Ann and Melody collided even though they tried desperately to separate. The second time it happened Melody fell forward Ann thought she was going to but got her balance back. The two of them stood there laughing for what seemed like hours but of course in reality was only a few minutes.
Then at
Timothy’s legs hurt and they were both exhausted when they arrived at the event. They waited im
Ann was so tired when she got home but of course it was Thursday night which meant Grey’s Anatomy was on TV so Ann went over to her late grammas place and watched TV. Then went back to her new house (which was recently built and looked fabulous if I do say so myself) and of course got caught up in a conversation with Todd on the computer. She was then falling as
The Dark Day
The day started off as it usually did at Will’s house. Extremely boring. A new radio station had been out on the air, which was all energetic music. This made Will’s morning go by faster. She danced in her room in front of her mirror as she straightened her hair. “Man, I could be on dancing with the stars with these moves” She thought. Her moves though looked like a cross between a drunken monkey and high rhino. No one has told her this yet, in fears that it will hurt her feelings. But for the good of mankind please tell her what she really looks like while dancing.
She finished getting ready and then got on the bus and got to school. She was late this time. The halls were already partly crowded with the dreamless students of the school. She saw Anna waiting for her at her locker; they said their greetings as Will placed her things in her locker. Then like the previous day, the crowd in the hall parted for the “populars”. Will and Anna rolled their eyes at the 4 “bubble heads”. Nervanna caught on to what the two were doing and walked over to them. She said “Hi ladies, don’t I look like so entirely and utterly like so beautiful today”. If only I had a camera and could take a picture of the faces of Will and Anna after Nervanna had said that to them. The only way to describe it was complete disgust. Anna then bent down to pick her binders off the ground, as she rose back up Nervanna pushed the books back to the ground and gave a little laugh. Once the binders had fallen the rings in them popped open and the papers flew over everywhere. Now you and me both know what it feels like to pick up papers in a crowded hallway.
The 4 witches laughed again in unison, then walked away. As they walked they reminded the people standing behind them of an old cow. In the sense of how it walks, with a sort of saunter. Their butt moves from side to side. Now a little off topic but the person who tells Will that her dancing is awful should go on a roll and tell them that their “sexy walk” looks like one a person who stands on a corner might do.
After the binder slap down in the morning, Anna and Will were feeling kind of down about everything and so the day was fairly uneventful until English Class…
At the very end of this exorbitantly boring English class, Nervanna stood up in front of the class holding Ben’s hand. This was very weird for they were of different social standings it was just a big NONO. She then cleared her throat and said
“After much deliberation I have convinced Ben to ask out his only love in this school…
There was a huge roar of laughter from the class. Nervanna was laughing the hardest. Ben looked hopeful waiting for his reply. Will sunk down into her hard plastic chair. Her face was beat red now. “How dare her! She knows how much he creeps me out. She’ll pay for this.” Will yelled in her head. She walked up in front of the class turned to Ben and Nervanna and said
“Ben your not my type, what you need to be looking for is someone like the girl standing beside you, and besides you are the only person in this school that honestly creeps me out.”
She then brushed against Nervanna’s arm as she walked out the door. Will turned back and gave her old friend a look that looked deep into her soul and burned it. She flicked her hair and walked to the hallway.
The rest of the day till lunch was so excruciating for Will. It dragged on like the last day of classes. You watch the clock tick but for every one tick it seems to take 5 seconds. At lunch she was called upon by one of her basketball team mates to go to a meeting in their coach’s room. Will loved Basketball with a passion. It was her favorite sport to play, also considering her height it also helped her play better. The basketball season though for her seemed like a life time and she dreaded playing games. The reason was that her team mates all disliked her. They each had a best friend on the team with Will having no friends it was sometimes hard to enjoy.
Once Will had made it to her coach’s room (which was the last one in the grade 9 wing) she sat down at a desk and waited for her other team mates to show up. It took 10 minutes for the rest of her team to show up and when they did, Will was really irritated. Which also helped her irritation was that Nervanna and Tiffany were on the team as well. Everyone laughed when they made stupid comments that weren’t even funny- all because they were ‘popular”. It then clued in to Will that her “team mates” were talking about a basketball wind up party that they attended the night before.
Tiffany slyly asked to Will- “Why weren’t you there last night?”
Will’s face went flush. She had not been invited to the party which was extremely hurtful to her.
“I wasn’t invited” she said almost in tears that her own team couldn’t even tell her that they were going to have a party for basketball.
“Yes you were at the meeting we had” the captain of the team said.
Right then their coach walked in and the conversation was broken up.
She walked down the crowded hallway (for it was lunch time), with almost a shame and held her head low. She walked into the lunch room and sat with her friends. She didn’t want them too ask what happened but knew that they would notice that she was upset and then ask.
“What happened?” Anna asked Will, the tone in her voice almost seemed that she knew what had happened.
Will explained the situation to her table of friends. They all gave encouraging feed back to her which helped her feel so much better. Then there was a moment where Will zoned out from the laughing and talking around her and thought about what had happened in the day. She thought and thought and all this thinking mad her even more upset and angry. It then came to her, a plan so mean and so devious. She would get revenge on all the witches that had hurt her today and she would make them all pay for what they did to her.
Will leaned back in her orange school chair, raised her eyebrow and gave a fierce smirk. Her plan was so perfect and so clever that even she was surprised by it. She would not start with her plan today but tomorrow the pain for her enemies would begin.
“TO THE THRONE OF HOTTNESS!”
After Will’s very eventful day, she came home to see some of her best friends. They were always there for her and were always fun to be around. As Will prepared to go outside to see them her trusty companion, Charley decided to tag along with her.
Charley was an energetic (in most cases he was considered a psycho
This picture is definitely not Charley for he is a way nicer animal then this one, but it’s just for a reference point. Will opened the door and stepped out into a rain/snow blizzard with her head down. Charley quickly followed her. This pointer was a loyal dog, one of the most loyal in existence and would follow his masters any where they went. He though regretted coming out, for the s
Will got to work once inside the shed preparing her friends food rations for the day. The feed was in 6 different bins each marked with what the contents were on the lid. Charley sniffed inside the grungy feed house looking for any mice. He loved to “play” with them. He was unaware though that his idea of playing was in fact the mouse’s idea of “The Paws of Indecency”. Unfortunately there were no mice in the building at that particular moment. Charley trotted out of the stale building and went inside the nearest corral. He looked cautiously around for any “of those giants with big heads”. Once he had decided that they were in the pasture, he quickly ran around the “big red monster” (it was not actually a monster it was in fact a big red barn. It was worn out and seen better days, but it always gave Charley the heebee jeebees for it creaked and leaked and was just plain spooky) and into the goats pen.
Charley had never had a good relationship with the goats in that pen for reasons he did not know. They were forever being mean to him. The four of the pigmy goats ran up to them with then horns pointed at him. He stood his ground and coolly spoke to his farm mates
“Ladies, Ladies lets not begin this again. Time after time you guys have poked and prodded me to no end but today will be the last day… for I am a hunk a muscle and the most gorgeous animal on this farm. You need to bow down to me” his voice got louder now “for I am your king!”
He then proudly shoved out his chest at the goats and put his head to one side.
There was a silence from both parties of creatures for 2 seconds. Then the goats busted out bleating.
The fattest and ugliest of the goats now spoke up and for some reason the goat talked in a thick Irish accent.
“You come out to see us every day claiming that you are a self proclaimed king of hunkness and that we should be your followers, and everyday we give you the same answer. NOT BLOODY LIKELY!!!!
The goats bleated some more in laughter. Charley now got defensive and raised his upper lip to show his teeth.
“One day you will follow me to my throne of hotness and we will make the world a sexier place”
Charley then quickly ran off towards the near by Chicken coop. His confidence was shattered like it was everyday by them. He could not understand why they would not follow him…
Will allowed Charley to go inside the coop. Charley also loved to “play with the chickens” but was always punished for doing this by Will. Life was full of challenges for Charley.
A loud snort came out from inside the chicken house. Fern the pig came to greet Charley. She was the newest edition to the farm; she had run away from her pig barn and came to be in Will’s farms horse shed. Fern was accepted with open arms by the people and animals alike. Charley warmed up to her the quickest of anyone.
The pig was pink with a docked tail and she was sly and clever far beyond any of the animals on the farm. Pigs are the smartest domesticated animal you know. Fern slowly walked around Charley and said (she had a heavy British accent)
“It’s a shame that them there goats won’t follow yee, for you are very attractive.”
Charley backed up slightly “Whoa! I don’t swing that way, you know, ACROSS SPECIES!”
Fern snorted “Either do I, I was just pointing out a common fact, for you know that I am the smartest one on this farm”
Charley gave a loud scoff and was just about to say a rude remark when
Will also came running (for she wanted to get out of the cold) and ran all the way back to the house. She opened up the house door and let Charley and herself in.
A Deal Made
The next day once
Anna felt awkward about the idea. It was not like Will to think up something this mean. She was in though on the idea and would help her friend until the end.
“I was like totally looking at the pictures in this magazine and I saw that like this really pretty model looked like you, I thought that you might want to know, cause like you know…
“Yah… we already knew that! GOD! Why don’t you just take your Wal-Mart bought clothes and go over to the land of dorks down the hallway.” Tiffany told Will. They all gave a little snicker.
“Well I also noticed that your shoes are so like fall of last year. If I was you I would try to hide them and save you some embarrassment” Will said.
The group besides Tiffany laughed. They had not noticed that her shoes were in fact “old”. It was quite a sight to them. Katelyn looked back to
“Wow I’m surprised that a nerd like you actually knew something about stuff, like you know whatever.” All the other girls agreed, even Tiffany.
“Yah I just came over here to see if you ladies wanted like you know have a dance to happen cause like I am on Student Council and could make it happen. What kinda like theme do you guys like, like you know. I was thinking… maybe… like SHOES as our theme! Do you like?”
“OH MY GOD! I’ve been meaning to like ask that group of people that your in if we could have a shoe extra extraordinary dance, but it keeps slipping from my brain thing, like so yah. If you could do that that would be so great and I would invite so many people to come. I Love IT!” Morgan exclaimed out into the hallway, her voice though was almost sarcastic.
“Do you honestly think that we are that dumb? We don’t even like you, you creeper. I know that you want to be like us, but trying to do lame tasks for us is not going to make that happen. Sorry you’re not beautiful material”
Will was so thrown back by this that she was speechless. She had to think fast in order to keep them still thinking on the same thought (they were all blondes so expectations are set pretty low for them). Will had come up with an idea. The other girls started to walk away.
“Wait!” She called out, “you’re right I do want to be like you guys, cause you are the most beautiful, prettiest, and smartest, most fashion smart girls in the school and I want to learn how to be those things. (Saying this out loud in the hallway was comparable to if Will had been tied down to a chair and a Baboon’s buttocks was shoved in her face for a whole day.)
The girls stopped and turned around on one heel. They had an evil grin on their faces.
“Sure you can be like our trainee person; it will work out for me because I need to do 10 hours of community service for gym class. I guess I can tell them that I was like helping out a homeless person or something….”
“Introductions to a Second family”
The rest of the day was pure agony with the group of four. They told Will how she should walk (which included the swaying like a cow), how to talk and how to look. At lunch she was about to loose it. It all would be worth it though in the end when Will got her revenge. Luckily for her she was not in very many classes with the witches. It was a nice relief when they were not bugging her. In the last class of the day, which was forestry ( I know what you are thinking, that is probably the lamest class in the history of high school, almost comparable to a Latin class. The dumbest part about that class, Will thought, was that they were in the prairies, where you would be lucky to find 1 tree), she met up with all her real friends.
They all sat together at the back of the classroom. Rod,
As the water flew across the room one of the students of the room decided that they wanted to join in the fun. His name was Cody. Will had a strange suspicion that he was either gay or superman (because not a day went by when he would not wear blue or red).
“Is it raining over here?” Cody said really excited.
“Why are you so excited? It’s not like its raining men!” Todd quickly relayed then burst out laughing.
That was pretty much the highlight of Anna’s and Will’s day. Will came home exhausted from her day of school. It was a Friday, the week had dragged on like Paris Hilton’s 15 minutes of fame.
Will came home on the bus which was a painful hour long. It was all okay though because she considered the riders as her second family. Her bus mates were of course Ben ( god I’m sure that you are really starting to feel bad for Will again) Veronica, her sister Launa, Will’s brother Jackson, Brad ( a guy she had known since grade 1) and his 2 other brothers, the bus drivers kids were also on, one of which was Will’s friend also since grade 1-Michelle. There were of course a couple more people on the bus but they were pee ons in this story so we will imagine that they are not there for right now.
Will hung out with Michelle until she got off the bus. She had the longest blonde hair and was often referred to as Barbie (and yes her “Ken” will come into play later on in the story). She was smart in school but had NO common sense. The one major flaw that she had was Tiffany. They had known each other since birth and since then Michelle had been friends with her. Tiffany though for her reputation (remember biggest backstabber) couldn’t resist hurting her. Michelle being the dumb blonde that she was though kept forgiving her and so the story goes on.
“My hair is so much shinier than yours Will” Michelle commented. She liked to brag for reasons Will would never know. She didn’t need to, she was a really nice girl but she was so insecure with herself.
“Are you excited for grad Will… we are gonna get you so drunk” Michelle pressed on. Michelle’s sister had invited her to her grad because their families were so close. Will decided that she would go to the party. It was really out of character of her, she truly hated crowds and parties.
Her hatred for parties grew from her first dances at her middle school. In grade 6 her school had a Halloween dance and Will dressed all in 70’s clothes. This included a gold chain, black bell bottoms, a velvet shirt and 6 inch heels. The best part of the costume was her black afro. She danced with her friends who at that time were the group of four. She was a foot taller than anyone in the dance due to her natural height and her heels. The boys all laughed at her but she ignored. All the girls in her group got asked to dance but she was left behind during slow songs. Will felt like a giant coming to crush down a helpless village. Her feet being a size 11 were comparable to Fred Flintstones. She felt that her actions were slowed down due to her largness as if she was Godzilla chasing Mothra down or maybe the power rangers transformer weapon they used.
One thing about the grad party that Will also didn’t like was the drinking. She knew how people change with liquor. She had never drunk and promised herself that she would not drink until she was 18. The only drink she had had was a sip of white wine. That’s right I’ve announced it
After Michelle was off Will went to go talk with Brad. He was one of the biggest red necks she had ever known. He was though one of the decent guys in the school. He had red hair, always worn a tattered base ball cap autographed by as he put it “smoking hot babes”. Will had suspicion that he had a crush on her for his ever persisting flirting. She returned sometimes back, but most of the time she ignored his persists.
All of her family eventually left the bus and it was just Will, her bother and the bus driver Trish. Will often had her most thought provoking conversations with her bus driver. They were good friends and would do a lot for each other.
“I’m going to do my marathon this Sunday, I’m running though with a one of my daughters on my back” Trish told Will.
There was a confused look on Wills face “are you carrying one?”
“NOOO, I figure my extra fat that I am carrying around equals one of my daughters!”
Will couldn’t help but laugh. Trish joined in too as they reached Willows destination.
Beauty and the Beasts
The next week of Will’s life was filled with the most amount of excitement that she had had in a long time. Though her days were very long at school with her enemies there were moments of extreme fun. Will worked at the school store on one of the days. Within the store you would expect to find apples, oranges and granola bars but in their place there were burritos, egg rolls, pizza pops, some more burritos, mini pizzas and chimichangas (deep fried burritos). Yep this store was definitely on the top ten healthiest menus in
Will came into the store early to skip out of her dreaded Forestry class. She told her teacher that the plates needed to be organized. She then gave a smile and fluttered her eyelashes and he allowed her to go. This was the same man who would not let anyone drink in his classroom and then would not let us go get a drink in the hallway if we asked.
Sorry, I was getting off topic wasn’t I? I tend to do that, the doctors tell me that there is a worm tunneling its way through my brain, so you can expect some lapses of sense. . . (Scoffs)… (Coughs)… (Bursts out laughing). Nah I don’t really have anything like that, oh off topic, right where was I…Oh right the store.
When Will arrived in the store she found not her usual co-worker, Derek (who by the way is the most boring person Will had ever known. She wanted to go up to him slap him a few times and yell into his face “BE INTERESTING!”) But a grade 11 guy named Jared. He was taller than
No offense to this women or anything, she is a… well….. my mom always said if you don’t have anything nice to say don’t say it all.
Business was good at the store for the half an hour that Will worked. The store closed at
Low and behold that is exactly where Anna was. She sat down on the opposite side of the table that Anna was at. Also at the table were
Will was somewhat surprised that she would just budge in like that. “Stop being a but-in-ski!” she called out to Melody. Mel turned around in her chair and began to eat her sandwich.
The rest of the day was rather boring so I will just imagine as if it was not there…
The next day was track and field at the Zone level. This means that you have to win at divisional’s to move on to this level.
Will’s event was at
Once out on to the middle of the track where her event would be she found Mr. Shaw and Mr. Wilson waiting for her. The day was extremely cold and you could tell that even their manly physic was getting very cold. The 2 parties said their hellos and then Will signed up for her event. She was last on the list so she had some time to freak out about doing bad. The girls all slowly went up and threw their discuses, each one getting better. The other girls there were what
Finally it was Will’s turn. Her heart jumped as she got into the ring to throw. She spun around as fast as she could then let go when she thought that she could take no more. It landed about in the same place as the rest of the girls through. She would have to do better than that is she wanted to go to provincials.
Her next two throws were mediocre. She was so upset with herself. Round one was over, now the first 6 farthest throwers would go onto to throw 3 more. The man called out the names in order from 1st to last. Will’s was 2nd from the end. She had almost got eliminated. There was so much stress going on in her mind. ~I need to do good for my school~ this is first for my school, then next for me~
Her next throw was one of her worst. Her two teachers pulled her aside and gave her the pep talk. Directions where coming out all over
-spin low
-throw high
-don’t wind up so fast
-explode on your last rotation
-be confident!
They told her that it was all very easy to remember. Yah right! Will thought. She walked onto the circle and forgot everything that her teachers had told her. She was still not confident but her efforts were still good enough for a nice throw. When she released it, she breathed in; she knew that is was good. The track officials measured it. It was the farthest throw. Now all she had to do was wait for her last turn just hoping that no one would throw farther than she did. Her wish was not granted. One of the taller girls threw a whole 50 cm farther than she did. Next Will was up and her throw was very shotty. It went a average distance.
All of throws were over. Will was told by her teachers that she had come in second place and that she would be going on to provincials! She was very excited. The officials gave them 6 finalists ribbons and the girls went off in their different directions.
Mr. Wilson and Mr. Shaw were extremely happy that Will had made it to provincials. They were not showing it though. They had to keep up their big man image.

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